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Some stuff in life are good
Some stuff in life are bad

The good stuff is the stuff we want to remember.
The bad stuff is what we are forced to remember.

We tend to rely on the good stuff
But we try to forget that bad stuff happened

While we weaker from the good stuff
And get stronger from the bad stuff

just need to handle it in the right way
to make the pain go away

don't forget
but learn

learn from mistakes
and learn from life

live to learn
learn to live
i made this for a friend of mine....
i may have accidentally left a few mistakes my word is acting up so i had to make this in open office
but i cant figure how to get the spelling check working in English

please tell me if i made a mistake and forget to get it out :)

oh and any tips on how to get these text better is also welcome :)

oh and another thing to the friend: don't worry everything will be alright :hug:
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oxi-moron Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2008   Digital Artist
^_^ really great!

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmm but there's a tiny little grammar mistake..... if you're still interested. The first few lines "Some stuff in life are good /Some stuff in life are bad"
Since 'stuff' is singular, the verb should be 'is' not are....



But I really like it :D
You're so talented with words :D
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rohaam Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2008
hmm maby remind me to rewrite it later in 5 min i have to go to school ^^;
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oxi-moron Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2008   Digital Artist
lol, it's not a huge mistake :)


and ugh... school... yuck XP
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rohaam Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
well please do remind me :P
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oxi-moron Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008   Digital Artist
okay :)
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rohaam Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
what was i suppose to rewrite? ^^;
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oxi-moron Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2008   Digital Artist
um....
I can't remember now ^^;
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rohaam Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2008
damn >_>
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yui-lian Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
het is echt ongeloofliijk mooi :)
vooral de laatste zinnen 'live to learn, learn to live' geven zoveel betekenis aan het gedicht ^^
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rohaam Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
dank je :) ik wist niet dat ze zo goed waren ^^;

ik ben niet zo een goeie dichter namelijk ^^;
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